Izumi Rio
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...We only suffer if we choose to...
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Post by Izumi Rio on Nov 26, 2006 0:45:07 GMT -5
Application Form Name:AngelicFairy Age:15 Character you want to play: Izumi Why do you want to be this character: Because I wuvs Izumi…and Mitsuki was taken  How up-to-date are you with the manga and anime?: I’ve seen all the episodes and I’ve read and own all the manga books. Do you have any roleplaying experience? If so, who and where did you play? I’ve played Sango and Miroku from Inuyasha on a group started on MySpace, Ed from Full Metal Alchemist at Alchemykitties.com ,Meroko also at a MySpace group, and I’ve also been a couple of my own made up characters in other RPG’s. How often are you on the internet: Like every other day… Write a sample of you as your character (at least 10 lines long): Okay, umm…here goes. This is set after Izumi tricked Meroko and left her with Takuto: Izumi looked up at the grey sky… “Rain. Why does it always seem to fall when I least want it…” He wondered aloud. Rain reminded him of her ….. ‘Rain is just like you’ he thought to himself. ‘ It’s noisy…sometimes annoying… But peacefull...and maybe even… comforting….The rain drops resemble your tears, don’t they?’ He sighed aloud, pushing back his fair hair… 'this emptiness won’t let me be near you… I can’t put my trust in you. Why trust something as trivial as human emotion?…You would soon to forget about me wouldn’t you?…just like she did .She said she loved me,too...she lied to me...but that’s all forgotten by the train tracks isn’t it? Yes, it’s best to not trust anyone…not even you.
Don’t say you love me,it’s just a lie of the heart we tell ourselves. Love won’t reach our souls because I refuse to trust it…So love me from a distance if you wish, but don’t attempt to touch my heart….I don’t want to cause you pain..but it’s the only thing that will keep me from loving you…You’ll be better off without me. Forgive me Meroko…I have to wash your love away…just like the falling rain…Have you read the rules? Takuto…I wuvs Takuto more than Izumi!!! I hope this is good...Though maybe I didn't portray Izumi well enough...  |
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Post by Mitsuki Koyama on Nov 26, 2006 19:53:10 GMT -5
It's a good application. Very good, I'm in awe.
I can't play cold Izumi if my life depended on it D:.(But I can play flirty Izumi xD)
Good as your application is, I noticed it was mostly 1st person so, would if be all right for me to see another sample with more action in it =D? Maybe even show us Izumi's flirty side xDDDDD.
Until then, I'll hold my acceptance(But i'm sure you'll get in =D)
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Izumi Rio
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...We only suffer if we choose to...
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Post by Izumi Rio on Dec 1, 2006 0:29:45 GMT -5
*huggles you* Okey dokey!  Izumi's flirtiness? I don't know,but I hope this adds a little more character involvement....Okay here goes: Izumi was sitting calmly on a tree staring out at the view when he caught a glimpse of two figures flying above him. He flew up to meet them. He sneaked up from behind and grabbed one of the flying figures, a young girl with beautiful pink flowing hair past her waste,with equally beautiful matching eyes."Gaah!Izumi!"The girl shouted as she turned around. "Hello, Me-chan!"Said Izumi with a tone of mischief in his voice. A young boy with deep blue eyes and grayish black hair stood next to the girl staring at Izumi. "What do you want Izumi?!!We're busy." Izumi blinked then took the girls hand "I just came to say hi to Me-chan"He smiled as he took her hand and kissed it. The young girl blushed. "Izumi, you can say hi to Meroko any other time!We're busy right now!"The boy gestured to Meroko so they can take their leave, but Izumi still held her hand. "Where are you two going, Tak-kun?" "Takuto needs to go get Mitsuki's bag. She seems to have left it at home" Replied Meroko. Izumi sighed then laughed a little sarcastically. "I suppose Mi-ki should be glad to have you as a maid. Your not much use as a shinigami!" Takuto glared at Izumi but turned away instead."Come on Meroko!"he yelled"let's get going!" "Ah.Right behind you." Meroko began to follow Takuto when Izumi grabbed her hand again. "Izumi let go!" commanded Meroko, but he held on tighter. He stroked her cheek lightly with his hand staring at her with his eyes "Me-chan...why don't you just give up on Takuto and come back to me?" She looked away, her face slightly red. Izumi grabbed her chin and kissed her. "I know you haven't forgotten about me." Meroko was about to reply when she heard Takuto call her name. "Meroko, hurry up!"He was already far off. "I'm coming Takuto!"Meroko turned and left without looking back. Izumi watched as she followed Takuto until they were nowhere in sight. "Meroko...you are mine, and no one elses..."Izumi stared at the hand he placed on her cheek,"I will win you back."He then turned around and flew off somewhere, in the distance. Well? *crosses fingers* |
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Takuto Kira
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Post by Takuto Kira on Dec 1, 2006 20:56:57 GMT -5
-Is replacement for Frosty-chan in the meantime-
I adore your sample. Infact, I think it's better then mine! XD
I'll give you 5 stars for it. But since you have the same problem as Maddy-chan, Frosty-chan advised me to tell you guys to seperate your conversation from the other sentences.
Example.
Izumi was sitting calmly on a tree, staring out at the view when he caught a glimpse of two figures flying above him. He flew up to meet them, sneaked up from behind and grabbed one of the figures. A young girl with beautiful, pink, flowing, hair past her waist, with equally matching eyes.
"Gaah! Izumi!"
The girl shouted, as she turned around.
"Hello, Me-chan!" Said Izumi with a tone of mischief in his voice.
Other then that, I love it. <3 Great job, and I hope you get accepted by Frosty-chann! -didn't ask if you guys were accepted or not-
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Post by Mitsuki Koyama on Dec 1, 2006 21:12:32 GMT -5
Yep, I agree with Guna-chan ^^;.
Please fix your sample before I can give you my opinion.
<---Is very picky T___T
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Post by Madoka Wakamatsu on Dec 1, 2006 21:16:38 GMT -5
very very picky....
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Post by Mitsuki Koyama on Dec 1, 2006 21:18:25 GMT -5
*dies* I'm sorry! I'll go hang myelf for being picky T__T
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Post by Madoka Wakamatsu on Dec 1, 2006 21:19:41 GMT -5
*tackles her* no! you mustn't! *cwies*
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Post by Mitsuki Koyama on Dec 1, 2006 21:20:19 GMT -5
=D Kay I'll live *clings* xDDD
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Post by Madoka Wakamatsu on Dec 1, 2006 21:21:31 GMT -5
Yayzers! ^^
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Izumi Rio
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...We only suffer if we choose to...
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Post by Izumi Rio on Dec 1, 2006 23:33:40 GMT -5
-Is replacement for Frosty-chan in the meantime-
I adore your sample. Infact, I think it's better then mine! XD
I'll give you 5 stars for it. But since you have the same problem as Maddy-chan, Frosty-chan advised me to tell you guys to seperate your conversation from the other sentences.
It's more my problem 'cuz my sister wrote her's on a piece of paper and asked me to type it for her. (Yes Madi-chan is my sister)I'm not sure if I understand but do you mean like this? Izumi was sitting calmly on a tree staring out at the view when he caught a glimpse of two figures flying above him.
He flew up to meet them. He sneaked up from behind and grabbed one of the flying figures, a young girl with beautiful pink flowing hair past her waste,with equally beautiful matching eyes.
"Gaah!Izumi!"The girl shouted as she turned around.
"Hello, Me-chan!"Said Izumi with a tone of mischief in his voice.
A young boy with deep blue eyes and grayish black hair stood next to the girl staring at Izumi.
"What do you want Izumi?!!We're busy." Izumi blinked then took the girls hand
"I just came to say hi to Me-chan"He smiled as he took her hand and kissed it. The young girl blushed.
"Izumi, you can say hi to Meroko any other time!We're busy right now!"The boy gestured to Meroko so they can take their leave, but Izumi still held her hand.
"Where are you two going, Tak-kun?"
"Takuto needs to go get Mitsuki's bag. She seems to have left it at home" Replied Meroko.
Izumi sighed then laughed a little sarcastically.
"I suppose Mi-ki should be glad to have you as a maid. Your not much use as a shinigami!"
Takuto glared at Izumi but turned away instead."Come on Meroko!"he yelled"let's get going!" "Ah.Right behind you." Meroko began to follow Takuto when Izumi grabbed her hand again.
"Izumi let go!" commanded Meroko, but he held on tighter.
He stroked her cheek lightly with his hand staring at her with his eyes
"Me-chan...why don't you just give up on Takuto and come back to me?" She looked away, her face slightly red. Izumi grabbed her chin and kissed her.
"I know you haven't forgotten about me." Meroko was about to reply when she heard Takuto call her name.
"Meroko, hurry up!"He was already far off.
"I'm coming Takuto!"Meroko turned and left without looking back. Izumi watched as she followed Takuto until they were nowhere in sight.
"Meroko...you are mine, and no one elses..."Izumi stared at the hand he placed on her cheek,
"I will win you back."He then turned around and flew off somewhere, in the distance. |
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Takuto Kira
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Post by Takuto Kira on Dec 2, 2006 12:10:06 GMT -5
There. To me, I have no problem with slight spelling mistakes or missing punctuation. I just want it clean and organized. ^__^
I'll accept it if I were an admin, but now it's all up to frosty-chan. |
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Post by Mitsuki Koyama on Dec 2, 2006 17:36:23 GMT -5
I'm going to go ahead and accept you because you've really got Izumi's personality down and its good.
Just work on those paragraphs aand spacing them
Accepted x3
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Izumi Rio
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Post by Izumi Rio on Dec 4, 2006 1:07:19 GMT -5
Yay!!! *goes to be emo*XD
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Takuto Kira
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Post by Takuto Kira on Dec 4, 2006 17:35:34 GMT -5
Closed Board.
=D I did it for you skittles-chaan~ |
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